The story was cute. However, the mystery part was rushed. There were some grammatical errors and a lot of the sentences were a bit long and awkward. I also thought the romance was a bit rushed and would have liked more flirtation between the main characters. It probably would have been better to either skip the mystery or made it a little longer and given those scenes more detail and dialogue. I was looking for a fun Christmas book and was a little disappointed.
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